Quite...good!
Nice music choose - i really appreciate how properly you choosed the music pieces for your cartoon. Also liked some animation skills...not perfect but enough good! The story about a money and the dream is really good idea. Blur effects here is usless part imho. You've to put a little more efforts with graphic and the colours with a light and you you probably could get a perfect cartoon for 3rd oreven 4th place of the day on NG. Keep it up - and you'll get a success!